Nice melodic action
But again, as i've noted in a different review, it's a bit smashed by bad mixing (the spikes here are at ~3.2khz and ~7.3) and too hard panning... I know it sounds neat for a minute, and maybe this was just an experiment, but it makes for a jarring experience that is otherwise nice and peaceful. Get a wave editor, pronto :)
More than the sum of it's parts.
Really. I know it's sorta slapped together [btw - if there was one thing i could tell you to improve, it would be to STOP USING PRESETS] and the mix is horrible, it manages to actually be listenable in the end. Much of your work here suffers from the 'presets' bug, and also would benefit from mastering the mix after you render it in FL -- maybe a bit of eq, normalization and compression. This would improve every single bit of audio on your page... especially this song. Not bad, not exceptionally great, just good.
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